How To Create A Good About Us Page For Your Business

By Mark Brinker 
Updated: September 13, 2024

By Mark Brinker  /  Updated: September 13, 2024

How To Create A Good About Us Page For Your Business

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If you're struggling to create a good About Us page for your business website, don't feel bad because they can be kind of difficult to do.

What should you write about? What do prospective clients want to know?

The good news is there is a proven step-by-step process for assembling a really well done About Us page in the shortest time possible — and that's what I'm going to show you today.

About your About Us page

Before we get into the step-by-step process, we need to quickly address two items:

  • What is the actual purpose of your About Us page?
  • What are the most common mistakes to avoid?

First, the purpose of your about page is very simple: To let prospective clients know it's safe to do business with you and that you're reliable, honest, and trustworthy. A well-crafted About Us page will accomplish this for you.

Second, here are the 4 most common mistakes to avoid when putting together your About Us page ...

  • Mistake # 1: Focusing on yourself. It might seem counterintuitive, but your About Us page is not the place for you to boast or go on about your accomplishments or how wonderful you are. Instead, you want to talk about yourself in terms of how you can help the person that's reading your About Us page, and I'll show you how to do that in a minute. 
  • Mistake # 2: Overcomplicating things. Keep your About Us page simple and succinct, and talk like a normal person. Avoid pompous platitudes or corporate-sounding mission statements that just sound like a big word salad.
  • Mistake # 3: Avoid being too generic. "We are the best" or "we offer great customer service", are bland and watered down, and really don't say much. Instead, what you want to do is provide some specifics about what makes you different and give people a reason to choose you over your competitors.
  • Mistake # 4: Not including pictures. People are naturally curious and prospective clients want to see what you look like. So, make sure to include a headshot on your About Us page or a photo of you in action. Or if you have employees, a picture of your team. 

How to assemble a really good About Us page for your business. 

Step # 1: Start with who you are. Begin with a simple intro and just tell people who you are and what you do, like you're meeting someone for the first time.

Here's an example for a fictitious person named "Vanessa Roberts, an IT consultant". Her About Us page would start with, "Hi, I'm Vanessa Roberts and I'm an IT consultant" because this is how you talk in real life.

Step # 2: Explain what your business does. No need to get fancy here. Just describe what you do in a way that someone outside your industry would understand.

You can also mention how long you've been in business, where you're located or what your service area is. Remember to keep things focused on how you can help prospective clients solve their problems or achieve a desired outcome. So here's what that might look like ...

"I've been helping small businesses with IT stuff for over 10 years now, whether it's troubleshooting tech issues, setting up secure networks, or just making sure everything runs smoothly. My job is to take the stress out of technology so you can focus on your business. I'm based in Chicago, but I work with businesses locally and remotely wherever they need me. Basically, if it involves tech and it's slowing you down, I'm here to help you fix that."

Step # 3: Share how you got into this line of work. You're not going to tell your entire life story here. Instead, just briefly mention what motivated you to start your business or how you got into this line of work. It doesn't have to be momentous or earth shattering. It just has to be real and authentic. For example ...

"I've always been the go-to person for tech help among my friends and family. After working in IT for a few years, I realized how many small businesses struggle with their tech problems they cannot afford to ignore, but they don't have the time or resources to handle. That's when I decided to start my own IT consulting business to help companies focus on what they do best while I take care of the tech challenges that come with running a business."

Again, nothing fancy here. You're just talking like a normal person.

Step # 4: What makes your business different? This can be how your product or service is different. Or maybe what's different is the overall experience you deliver as compared to your competitors. You want to try and identify a hot button issue that'll give your prospective client a reason to choose you over a competitor. Here's an example ...

"I get it. Tech can be confusing and the last thing you need is someone throwing around a bunch of "geek speak" you don't understand. I explain things in plain simple language so you know exactly what's going on and why it matters. I'm here to make it easy, not overwhelming, whether it's troubleshooting or long-term planning. I focus on practical solutions and clear communication that keeps your business running smoothly."

What Vanessa's really hammering home here in this example is that she speaks in plain English, not tech mumbo jumbo, which I know for a fact is a real frustration for a lot of business owners when dealing with technical service providers.

Step # 5: Talk about your team. This is an optional step and obviously it doesn't apply to you if you're a solo practitioner. But if your business does have a team, share the names and faces along with the brief bio of each team member and the role each person plays. This demonstrates there are real people at your business.

In our example, let's say Vanessa has an office manager named Shannon. Shannon's bio might read ...

"Shannon keeps our office running smoothly. She manages day-to-day operations and makes sure clients always receive timely support. Outside of work, Shannon enjoys hiking and spending time with her two dogs, Sidney and Bella." 

Again, don't overcomplicate this. Keep it simple.

Step # 6: Add a bit about you personally. Up to this point, everything has been about your business. But adding a short personal bio provides another layer of authenticity, making you even more relatable. This step is optional, and if you're not comfortable sharing anything personal, then just skip this step.

But if you are fine with sharing a few fun facts about yourself, you can include things like hobbies, interests or pets. Where were you born? Are you married? Do you have kids? What are your favorite sports teams? Are you involved in the local community? 

So, in our example, Vanessa's personal bio might read ...

"When I'm not helping clients with their IT needs, they'll find me outdoors exploring nature with my dog, Max. I'm originally from Minnesota, but I've called Chicago home for the past 15 years. In my free time, I love cooking, discovering new coffee shops and catching games when the Cubs are playing. I also volunteer with a local youth tech program helping kids learn basic coding skills. It's a great way to give back and inspire future tech experts."

Step # 7: The CTA (call to action). You need to let prospective clients know how to get in touch with you. Be direct and specific. If you want them to call you, say so. If you want them to fill out a form on your website, say so. Here's an example ...

"If you're ready to tackle your IT challenges or just want to learn more about how I can help, feel free to reach out. You can call me directly at (555) 123-4567 or fill out the form on my website and I'll get back to you promptly. I look forward to speaking with you." 

Congratulations! You've just written a really good About Us page for your business. Not so bad, right?

The key is just chipping away at it one section at a time, rather than trying to create the whole thing at once.

There's one more thing you need to do before you can put a bow on your About Us page and call it a day.

Supporting content for your About Us page

To boost the effectiveness of your About Us page, you need to layer in a bit of supporting content. Specifically, you'll want to add one or more of the following items:

  • Pictures and/or video. As mentioned earlier, include a headshot of you and or your team or a picture of you in action performing your service. Remember, people need to see more than just words on a page. 
  • Awards, certifications, memberships, or credentials. These demonstrate competence and provide added credibility.
  • Client testimonials. For social proof, you'll want to sprinkle in a few client testimonials because you can never have too many people singing your praises.
  • Links to your social media. Assuming you're on social media, you'll want to provide links to your social media channels to further demonstrate you are a real-live person. 

FAQs regarding About Us pages

Should you write your About Us page in the first person or third person point of view? 

It all depends on the tone you want to set. First person creates a more personal, approachable feel, making it seem like you're speaking directly to the reader. Third person feels more formal and professional, and it's often used by larger organizations or when you want to convey a more corporate tone.

For small-to-medium sized businesses or service professionals, first person point of view is usually the best choice because it feels more genuine and personal.

Does your About Us page need to be visually "stunning"? 

Nope. Stunning is just an ego-based buzzword. You do not need anything fancy or over the top. Sure, you want your page to look nice, of course. But your About Us page just needs to look clean, organized, and easy to read, and you'll be just fine.

The important part is the information on your page.

Conclusion

At the end of the day, what really matters is, "Does your About Us Page make prospective clients feel secure about doing business with you?", because your About Us Page is all about boosting trust and confidence.

So, if you need to create a good About Us page for your website (or revamp your existing About Us page), you now have a proven step-by-step process that's as close to a paint-by-number system as you're going to find. 

Now go create a great About Us page for your site!

About the Author

Mark Brinker is president of Mark Brinker & Associates — a business website design and development firm in Sterling Heights, MI. Mark offers a FREE masterclass training, "The 5 Steps To Creating A Website That Consistently Attracts Ideal Clients", which you can watch here. Mark also publishes lots of great (and free!) content on his YouTube channel.

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